Wait for You
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Wait for You
See the pain
Etched on my face
Carved by love
Turned into hate
While I wait for you
Feel the ice
Growing cold
As I get old
Waiting for you
Know the aching
Deep inside me
Turn to stone
I’m so alone
Still waiting for you
For the past
And a love
That did not last
But I’ll wait for you
This heart of mine
Once beat so strong
Will beat no more
Before too long
And I’ll wait for you
When this pain
Drops from my face
And it’s time
To leave this place
I’ll be waiting for you
When my heart
Feels hurt no more
There’s a land
Where I will go
And I’ll wait for you
I’ll be yours
And you’ll be mine
We will love
Till the end of time
Or I’ll wait for you
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You Are indeed a beautiful and talented writer.
I look forward to reading so many more by you.
Have a wonderful weekend.
Eddy.
Deborah, Thank you very much for the visit, and the very nice comment, much appreciated.
tubuisness. this is beautiful.. cant wait to read more of your poems..
Voted way up
debbie
NightFlower, thank you very much for you kind comment, I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
beautiful poem, lyrical and rhythmic...greatly enjoyed and leaves a lasting impression on psyche. i could dance to it.
You seem to cover the spectrum of emotions, in the situation you are describing. Well done and voted up! Jamie
Didn't know you did poems. Your poem is so sweet.
Capedium, many thanks for the comment.
I love the pictures, they are so beautiful...
Hi Brett, thanks for the very kind comment and taking the time to stop by.
They do say, What does not kill us makes us stronger, My grandmother was the strongest women I know.
Powerful ... found myself thinking that I hoped he was worth waiting for ... sad, to hear your explanation. Life can be so hard.
Ram; It's so nice to know you're "WAITING" for me, unfortunately, I can only make it as far as your webpage to read your latest masterpiece.
Most welcome, my dear, anytime. Just drop me a line about 3 days in advance and leave everything about your visit to me as my dignified guest. My eager wait begins..
Rambansal, thank you very much for the comment, I'll be coming round for a visit soon.
A great expression of desire to love. Yes, darling .. love you much more than you think...
WD, Nice to see you back, so glad you liked it, sometimes good things are worth the wait.
The poem is inspired by my grand mother who knew how to love but could never hate, She waited a lifetime for my grand- father who was working in Caracas and unfortunately he died there, I never heard her utter a single word against him for staying away so long from his young family. I'm not so generous.
Kevin, thank you for the vote and the kind comment, very much appreciated.
Great poem,tobusiness, very moving, very deep,and very true for many people.I look forward to many more. I voted up and beautiful.
I hate waiting, but you have made waiting a beautiful experience. Great graphics and photos!
Ian, what are you waiting for? just go for it. I am very new to this, but with each poem I write, I learn something and I enjoy it so much. thank you for taking the time to stop and comment
I feel like writing yet another poem cuz this one just got my creative juice flowing. wonderful poem. Voted up.
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Eddy, coming from someone with your talent, well..
lets just say this means a lot. Thank you for being generous