Make me Burn

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By tobusiness

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Source: Microsoft Clip Art
Source: Microsoft Clip Art
Source: Microsoft Clip Art

Make me Burn

Your love light shines

Shine on me

Your smile is bright

Light my way

Your kisses sweet

Touch my lips


Your arms are strong

Don’t let me go

You’re passion intense

My knees are weak

Your touch’s electric

Turn me on


You’re the magician

I’m spellbound

You’re the wind

Make me fly

You’re the teacher

Make me learn


You’re a tease

Make me beg

You’re on fire

Make me burn

Your body’s hot

Make me sweat


You’re the air

Make me breathe

You’re a dream

Don’t wake me up

You’re a fever

I am burning


Your love’s contagious

I’m infected

You’re a sin

I’m a sinner

This is wrong

I’ll pay the price


Light your fire

Make me burn




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tobusiness Hub Author 4 weeks ago

Debbie, I see you managed to find this one, I'm so glad you like my passionate side :)

I'll be over to yours later, all the best to you.

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Deborah Brooks 4 weeks ago

wow... awesome this is my kind of poems.. Lol

blessings

Debbie

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tobusiness Hub Author 2 months ago

Thank you Jamie.

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jhamann Level 6 Commenter 2 months ago

Great poem! You knocked it out of the park! Jamie

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tobusiness Hub Author 3 months ago

Frank, I'm so glad you can feel the heat, many thanks for the visit and comment.

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Frank Atanacio Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

damn.. I can see the smoke and feel the heat up and awesome!

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tobusiness Hub Author 3 months ago

Hi Ram, You say the nicest things, thank you for the comment

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rambansal Level 5 Commenter 3 months ago

You are the shear love, I am immersed in..

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Capedium Level 5 Commenter 3 months ago

Hmmmm.... Hmmmmmm.. This is off the hook.. This is romance at it's peak.. Topbusiness, hmmmmmm, this sounds like an actual event oh! (lol-laugh out loud)..

You said it like we all feel it.. I mean not we all, minus me (smiles)... This is hot.. So hot.. Like I said.. This is lovers first night.

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tobusiness Hub Author 3 months ago

Princess, If your man is not actually saying it to you, I bet you he is thinking it. Thanks for the comment, well appreciated.

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tobusiness Hub Author 3 months ago

Thank you,Eman for the comment, glad you liked it, just having some fun with this

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The original Eman Level 3 Commenter 3 months ago

Dont we all crave for such an intimate moment with that special person :).Nice work.

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Princess Prisca Level 5 Commenter 3 months ago

tobusiness,

This poem is hot, sexy, steamy, burning, and what I wait to hear my 'future husband' say to me.

Great work!!!

Ciao...Princess Prisca (voted way up and awesome)

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