Ain't No Sunshine

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By tobusiness

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Ain’t no sunshine

I miss your kiss upon my face

I miss your warm embrace

You love me like a supernova

Don’t need a Casanova

I ache to feel your radiant heat

When this chilling sleet retreats

I dream of you, my ray of sun

Shining down on me

But I awake, in the cold misty dawn

Only to find you gone

I thought I saw you again today

Oh, how I wish you’d stay

Instead you kissed my window pane

And off you go again

I need you here, to keep me warm

In this cold winter's morn

You’ll shine your incandescing light

To eclipse my dreadful plight

One day you’ll come

When winter’s done

When song birds sing

To welcome spring

And I won’t feel

That ice cold chill

That you don’t care

And winter’s here

No radiant heat

Just cold, cold feet

Oh how I miss the sun

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tobusiness Hub Author 2 months ago

Jamie, Thanks again.

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jhamann Level 6 Commenter 2 months ago

I love the ending of this poem, well done. Jamie

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Deborah Brooks 3 months ago

Oh how I miss the sun.. lovely poem.. I long for spring,, I voted way up

debbie

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tobusiness Hub Author 3 months ago

Hi Ram, thank you for the visit, I'm afraid I don't quite get the comment, please expand....

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rambansal Level 5 Commenter 3 months ago

Alas, 'you' was me. A very nice narration of the expected love.

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tobusiness Hub Author 3 months ago

Lord de cross, many thanks for your visit and comment.

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lord de cross 3 months ago

Amazing inspiration Tbusiness! Voted up!

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tobusiness Hub Author 3 months ago

WD, We've got enough home grown problem of our own, don't think we can handle any more. Obama was always going to have a rough ride, like over here, he too, inherited massive problems, on top of which he also took on the health reform. I will check out Timothy Franz Geithner, at least he should be able to balance the books, or should that be cook the books?

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WD Curry 111 Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

Don't get me started on that. Romney and Our Governor are both straight from an episode of the X-Files. I am an independent. We don't wear hats and wave flags like five year olds at a birthday party. We rarely have a viable candidate, and settle for changing laws and the like.

We formed a grassroots movement to eliminate gill nets (destructive fishiing practice) from state waters. We fight hard against off-shore drilling and Yankees who want to bring their tax system down here with them. We tackle social issues too. We don't like the Republicans or the Democrats.

Personally, I like Obama a lot. I hate the machine behind him. Watch out for Timothy Franz Geithner (ex-president of Federal Reserve Bank & now Secretary of Treasury) and his ties to Deutsche Bank, sister. They are coming your way, too.

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tobusiness Hub Author 3 months ago

Princess, Many thanks, so glad you like it

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tobusiness Hub Author 3 months ago

Thank you Ian

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tobusiness Hub Author 3 months ago

Funny, Just watching the news from Florida, as I'm reading your comment, looks like Romney's the guy who's going to give Obama a run for his money.

But back tobusiness, thank you for the visit and comment. About the song, know anyone who can put a tune to it?

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WD Curry 111 Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

Sorry I can't relate. I live in Florida.

Just joking I have lived in many other places and know this feeling well. You have deftly captured it. I love this line,"Instead you kissed my window pane." This is a song!

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Ian Dabasori Hetr Level 4 Commenter 3 months ago

Woh! this is so lovely. voted up.

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Princess Prisca Level 5 Commenter 3 months ago

tobusiness,

"Ain't No Sunshine When He's Gone" - I so understand that. Nice work, I like it!

Ciao...Princess Prisca

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